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Post by kima on Sept 25, 2006 14:54:06 GMT -5
~I've watched you from far away,
you have watched me near.
You know there is a lot more to,
my bold and dark veneer.
~My words sharply spoken show you down towards,
A lightened path hath my token,
Stay away from the darkened ward.
~Resisting the destiny that binds me,
The tightened devil's chains,
Please help free me,
From the dark I must refrain
~Alas through all these troubles,
I have got yuor back,
Spoken more clear than a mumble:
I am your angel dressed in black
Cati I hope yu don't mind, this is the same stuff I posted at WDO
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Post by Cati on Sept 26, 2006 13:00:47 GMT -5
ofcourse not silly.. it's a loveley poem.. :
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Post by kima on Sept 26, 2006 15:08:18 GMT -5
Merci merci ^^ I shall post another then ASAP!
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Shishou
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Post by Shishou on Sept 30, 2006 14:32:14 GMT -5
A wonderful poem!
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Post by kima on Sept 30, 2006 20:37:17 GMT -5
merci ^^ *shall post more*
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Roiben
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Post by Roiben on Oct 1, 2006 19:15:49 GMT -5
EEEEEE. I loved the poems they are radtastic
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Post by kima on Oct 2, 2006 16:22:12 GMT -5
woot!
oh, and one i wrote a long time ago..and these have no titles soo..yeah
1.
I'm so deaf I can't hear the rythm to my own tune anymore,
So blind I can't see my reflection in the mirror no longer.
I'm so numb that I can't feel the happiness that once filled my soul.
I'm so wrapped up in this masquerade that I'm playing I can't seperate the truth from this web of lies I weave.
But I know, if I try, I can tear this web down to the ground,
And leave it there where it belongs.
2.
Stay with me and comfort me, for we have been through so much to leave eachother now.
As life progresses the battles rage and last longer and I will need someone to fight beside me...
Until my soul falls weak from the hate this world has created.
Lean on me and cry with me, for I came to you to make your day bright when the world rains in sadness.
In such a cruel world we will need eachother.
3.
The slight sound in the background, so chilling to the bone.
The shadow on the wall, creeping around the corner.
The doll that turns its head, just to watch your lip quiver and your eyes widen with fear.
In the night, growing dark, every nightmare you fear comes out to play with your mind.
You can't seem to close your eyes, not able to trust the area around you.
Day comes and you can finally rest untill the darkness creeps upon you again.
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Roiben
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Post by Roiben on Oct 2, 2006 17:25:05 GMT -5
Those are awsome
*nods then huggles you*
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Post by kima on Oct 4, 2006 14:47:41 GMT -5
YAY! thank ya thank ya ^^
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Post by Cati on Oct 6, 2006 16:56:40 GMT -5
I liked the first one best.. the third one was creapy..  but good |
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Post by kima on Oct 7, 2006 9:35:59 GMT -5
hehe ^^ I like the third one best!
I based this one off of the stairway to heaven ^^
As I sit in my room I wonder, do our shadows conquer our souls as life progresses?
So I seek and I shall find the lady we know, who shines a dazzling white light and wants to show me,
No matter what we do, no matter where we go, everything we hold will always turn to gold.
And so it seems we never listened before to the tune, ever so true to our everlasting greed, to the mind pollution,
to the declaration of hate that we must find fallacious.
So to that I say: "look to the east thy brother and thy sister, and forget about our sorrowfull woes and begin anew, like the sun whom always finds a place in its very core to show us warmth and generosity.
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Roiben
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Post by Roiben on Oct 12, 2006 9:01:56 GMT -5
EEE-i love it angeler!
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Post by kima on Nov 23, 2006 15:51:23 GMT -5
yay! ^^ *huggles*
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Post by Roiben on Dec 6, 2006 10:35:18 GMT -5
*huggles back*
^___^
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but good