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Post by Cati on Sept 7, 2006 14:04:07 GMT -5
Here is a poem of me.. I might ad more
Make me love
A cold breeze is all I feel
A broken soul is that what's left
How did I come to this being
Why do I feel so much pain
No emotions, only sorrow
No more tears, I cried them all
Now I know, I'm pretty lost
Even lost my innocence
Darkness is all I know
it's so long ago since something else
I even forgot the sweet tast of hapiness
I don't remember the ocean's song
I wanne know the light again
I wanne see something else
I wanne tast hapiness again
I wanne sing that ocean's song
Will you help me rise again,
Will you make me love again?
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Post by dranz on Sept 22, 2006 2:18:22 GMT -5
Aww you always write sad poems ~ Hugs you ~ Write a cheerful one sometime and put it here lol!
Tis beautiful though ^_^
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Post by Cati on Sept 24, 2006 8:18:50 GMT -5
I can't... I'm bad at cheerfull poems
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kima
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Post by kima on Sept 25, 2006 14:53:00 GMT -5
I love it!
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Post by Cati on Sept 26, 2006 13:03:44 GMT -5
*bows thank you*
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kima
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Post by kima on Sept 26, 2006 15:08:53 GMT -5
no problemo! ^^ *hugglesness*
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Roiben
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Post by Roiben on Oct 1, 2006 19:19:03 GMT -5
Ice Cream buddy, i loved your poem!
it was amazing!
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Post by Cati on Oct 2, 2006 13:31:50 GMT -5
Thank you... I typed out another one but I'll post it tomorow*
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kima
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Post by kima on Oct 4, 2006 14:48:08 GMT -5
YAY! ^^
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Roiben
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Post by Roiben on Oct 12, 2006 9:02:21 GMT -5
you better post it cuz i can't wait to read it!
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Shishou
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I'm tough.
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Post by Shishou on Oct 13, 2006 10:54:29 GMT -5
yes I agree with Roiben!
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Post by Cati on Oct 15, 2006 10:33:51 GMT -5
empty
Empty is my heart
Empty and cruel
Leave me be..
I shall leave..
I wish to no longer care no more
Heart stabbed,
Heart ripped
Heart empty
Heart no long here
World who doesn't want me here
World Which I fear
Leave me be
I shall leave
No longer do I want to be here
sweet coldness...
Bitter end
Sweet coldness
Deadly friend
My blood red, draining from me
Dead corps I shall be
Cruel world leave me be
Me and my heart shall leave
No longer do I wish to share..
No longer do I wish to care
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Roiben
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Post by Roiben on Oct 17, 2006 8:45:32 GMT -5
*feels agreed with*
Wow cat, yet again it was absolutly fantastic!
It's so sad, but it is so amazing
*claps*
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Shishou
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I'm tough.
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Post by Shishou on Oct 19, 2006 15:57:00 GMT -5
Very sad... But very good!
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Post by Cati on Oct 20, 2006 15:26:16 GMT -5
Arrigato.. *bowS*
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